There lived a girl in my hometown...
She was shy,but loud
short,but proud...
Everyone admired her beauty
Her responsibility was her duty
She send her little brother to school
and waited for him till noon...
One day a poor chap saw the girl
and his mind began to whirl...
Then everyday from day to night
they both sat staring in the twilight...
Stars twinkled,clouds thundered
but they were unstuck,unplundered..
The cupid had hit they knew
marriage followed in queue
Two children came in league
It was their technique..
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Nice one.. just a small suggestion, include some more humor, would sound good.. all the best..
ReplyDeletethe last word always makes me go lol..nyways boss..way to go :)..!
ReplyDeletetym for u to create a few more um..wht shud i say..thoughts..!
ya thoughts...ill number them like that if i dont get a title..:D
ReplyDeletethanku....ur my inspiration...uknw!!!:P
and thanks for d advice sir...:P
ReplyDeleteill follow it nextime
well yea..i'm certainly ur INSPIRATION[wow..that's a big one] :P :)
ReplyDeletei got an inspiration 4m ur blog n thought of making one..zeroed in on a name as well...don't know wht 2 post but..lol..!!
now see...my name is cuming as rakesh...he he he
ReplyDeletehahhaa..."rakesh"...sahi hai..then i guess we both r each other's inpiration..:*
ReplyDeletenice poem... :)
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